这篇英语作文应该怎么修正和润色?

2012年,奥运会将在英国伦敦举行,你给在英国居住的朋友乔治写一封信询问奥运会的组织情况,并说明你将在奥运会期间到英国参观比赛。请他描述一下当地的交通,票价,会馆等情况,还希望他到机场接你。
上述是作文题目的大意。请帮我修改和润色下这篇文章,谢谢。
Dear George:
Are you getting along?
As is known to us all, this year is a Olympic year, and the Olympic Games will be held in London. I will go to London when the Olympic because I really like sports you know.
I don’t know the organization of the Olympic Games. Could you tell me something about the organization ,London’s traffic conditions the games hall and fares. It is the most important thing that could you come pick me up at the airport when I came. I believe that you are sure will make me have a happy trip.
There is an old saying : “at home by their parents, go out to rely on friends”.
Thank you.
Yours,
Caspar.

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先把语法改改,这样子的实在读不懂,标点也有少打吧,我读起来是这感觉,至少改通顺了我们在讨论润色的话题,对吧

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